Talk:Endings

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I'm going to be making some fairly large edits to this article. It's getting a little cluttered with every possible ending listed independently and in arbitrary order. For example, the "Death Before Time Loop" and "Death After Disabling the Ash Twin Project" could just be one ending, since both give the same "You Died" message. The better option for this is one category where we list both criteria for that ending instead of it being two different categories. Also some of the more recent additions are written pretty poorly. I'll be going through them and touching them up. I'll also change the picture because there's no reason it needs to be in Infobox format. — ReflectedPower2104 (talk) 04:11, 22 January 2020 (UTC)

I went ahead and make the changes I proposed. I didn't change much in the "Self" ending (aside from adjusting some personal pronouns), as I haven't actually experienced the ending and don't really understand what the article is saying about it, so I'll leave it to someone who knows more about it. — ReflectedPower2104 (talk) 06:46, 22 January 2020 (UTC)